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Deliverance |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Deliver me from the evil sinner who with greedy fingers & hungry eyes searched for me when young & tender unwary of those both cunning & wise Deliver me from the love & hate of the father figure, drunkard, friend who easily won my trust but later used it against me as a means to an end Deliver me from the nightmares followed the phobias, stomache ahces, headaches, fears the missing places in my past that haunted me through out the years Deliver me from the sacrifices of more than half of all my years the unexplainable troubles & worries the depression, the mania, & endless tears Deliver me from the unbelievers who blamed me for the unspeakable a child of five, unwilling reciever of his wretched desires, the unthinkable Deliver me too, from my own mother turning her back when I needed her most the one I'd sacrificed my life for & 'til this day, haunted by it's ghosts.. Deliver me from the pain of limping upon two halves as yet not whole a woman, child, both just beginning the journey to unity, my ultimate goal Deliver me from the evil sinner who's yet to pay for his dirty deeds for as long as I hold this hate within me from his clutches, I am not free I beg for deliverance, deliver me, I have the power inside to be free... -Tier{R.T.} 4/01 |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
My friend you shall be Deliever.  Great idea and topic that you written on. Great work. Keep it up.Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.) |
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sgreybe Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 209London, UK |
This is great (and that is my honest opinion)... I really enjoyed it, though it had a gut-wrenching touch of sadness to it. *hugs* my friend. Sylvia |
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Swamp¤Faeryie Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 393fairyland....of course;) |
wow,this was a perfectly written peice,you have described everything so well,every detail is just how it is...the missing places in your memories "Deliver me from the nightmares followed the phobias, stomache ahces, headaches, fears the missing places in my past that haunted me through out the years Deliver me from the sacrifices of more than half of all my years the unexplainable troubles & worries the depression, the mania, & endless tears" that blows me away.very well done. samantha much madness is divinest sense,and much sense the starkest madness~Emily Dickinson |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
Oh wow! So wonderful and powerful. This must have hurt so much to write. I know the feeling of these lines: "Deliver me from the evil sinner who's yet to pay for his dirty deeds" Indeed it does haunt you throughout the year, doesn't it? Brilliant piece that has taken a respectable amount of strength to write, I applaud you. With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. |
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Blaec Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 130The Sunshine State |
Simply amazing poetry. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
i thought this poem was jus amazing.. wow! i also acknowledge you for writing this..great poem.. keep writing  ...?if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Tiersden, this is great! very powerful and yet, so very sad. Enjoyed Maree |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thank you Xenox, Sgreyb, Swampfaerie, Dragonpoe,Anonymous Albert, Blaec, & Dark Angel, for taking the time to read and comment on this work. The poem itself was not difficult to write. Rather, it was the posting. I wasn't sure whether or not I could, but by the time the poem was finished, I knew that I would. Perhaps the side of me that remained the frightened child is finally trying to grow up. *smiles* Thank you all again, -Tier |
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Swamp¤Faeryie Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 393fairyland....of course;) |
You've shown alot of courage in this peice tiersdin,i'm glad you decided to post it,please know you're not alone in your struggle!!  sam again much madness is divinest sense,and much sense the starkest madness~Emily Dickinson |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
*Hugs* Thank you, Sam *smiles* ~Tier |
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Zyell Member
since 2000-07-28
Posts 121USA |
the pain others inflict, if we could rise incredibly high, far above the anguish, until it could not touch, the vulnerability of who we were! May you find peace, writing is a worthy first step! powerful story, delivery, excellent! |
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