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dragonpoe
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since 2000-11-12
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Palm Bay, Florida

0 posted 2001-04-29 07:52 PM




Falling Past Forever

Last of the starlight glitters
High within the Winter’s sky
Low upon the ground I walk
Beneath the blossomed moon.

Horizon calls the traveler
As the heart calls in pain
I ache, I cry, my feet are moving
Carrying me far past home.

Dawn breaks with fiery fingers
Reaching wide and deep within
I walk along the dusty road
Knowing that tomorrow lies ahead.

Horizon calls the traveler
As the heart calls in pain
I ache, I cry, my feet are moving
Carrying me far past home.

And I am falling past forever
May God find me somewhere
I am falling past forever
In the fading of the night.

Joann Renee’ Muszynski
4/29/01

With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
dragonpoe

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Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 2001-04-29 07:54 PM


Beautiful!  Sorry I have no better descriptions at present, but I felt the despair and confusion....
Isis

*War produces one thing - Cemetaries. And in cemetaries there are no enemies!*
~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit.



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2 posted 2001-04-30 01:42 AM


The poetry seems to describe a confused and maybe a hopless soul looking above(to God) for answers. Great work.

Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.)

destiny502
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since 1999-11-23
Posts 57
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3 posted 2001-05-03 08:31 AM


i really enjoy your poems..after i read this one and When the Heart Falls i went and looked for others by you.  
Heather

[This message has been edited by destiny502 (edited 05-03-2001).]

Ginners
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since 2000-07-22
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Mullica Hill, New Jersey
4 posted 2001-05-03 08:53 AM


This was very good i liked it a lot  

"I'll build a wall if we can keep them on the other side"---NIN
"There is no always forever, just this"-the cure

Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364
east coast
5 posted 2001-05-03 09:11 AM


Excellent writing, Dragonpoe, loved this!

~Tier

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