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Skoota
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since 2000-12-23
Posts 28
Australia

0 posted 2001-01-16 07:42 AM


This is dedicated to a friend who died 3 years ago, saving another from a drunken driver.

Deedlite, you will be missed.

I thought my heart would finally mend
Then I heard your laugh upon the wind
Your face lights up my mem'ry
A fleeting glimpse of someone I can never see

You were the gentlest person I knew
Loved by so many, hated by few
You were mischievious, bubbly and bright
You were someone special, a guiding light.

But then that day came, and you lost your life
In an act so like you, of self sacrifice.
The end came fast, and with grace you fell.
Now life here without you is like a season in hell

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Come to me
Kill for me
Worship me.
Follow everthing I do
Act it out before me

Godhead - The Reckoning


[This message has been edited by Skoota (edited 01-16-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Simon Boot - All Rights Reserved
firecrakker
Member
since 2000-10-20
Posts 235
Virginia
1 posted 2001-01-16 08:28 AM


This is a very nice tribute to someone so special. Beautifully expressed!

Sheila

Ginners
Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339
Mullica Hill, New Jersey
2 posted 2001-01-16 08:34 AM


very nice, i know this feeling i lost 2 close friends about 3 years ago too.  this was very nice
Temptress*Moon
Member
since 2001-01-15
Posts 240
Long Island, NY
3 posted 2001-01-16 07:01 PM


This brought a stream of tears to my eyes....I lost a friend not to long ago....to a motorcycle accident...in which he was driving and he was drunk   stupid yes..he took his own life..
It's a hard thing to recover from losing someone close....but the good memories of them live on with us always.....



I slept and dreamed that life was beauty was thy dream then a shadowy lie? -ESH-

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