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Temptress*Moon
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since 2001-01-15
Posts 240
Long Island, NY

0 posted 2001-01-15 09:43 PM




The loneliness that i feel
Holds me capative in my
Own Prison cell
Trying to brake out, these
Bars made of steel
Held here forever
Trapped by my own fears
What am i to do?
Given a life sentence
Chained to the wall
Answering my own questions
A dark cloud raised above my
Head
Filled with endless hopes and
Dreams
That i once thought about
Pressing my flesh against the
Cold of the steel
Closing my eyes
Letting my dreams slip from
Me
This is where i die,
Alone,Scared,
In solitude i hide



I slept and dreamed that life was beauty was thy dream then a shadowy lie? -ESH-

© Copyright 2001 Danyel L. Azar - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2001-01-15 10:31 PM


Aha...the one's locked within the real prison cells have lost so many opportunities and possibilities that only freedom can offer for those who embrace the vibrancy of life..James
Ginners
Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339
Mullica Hill, New Jersey
2 posted 2001-01-16 08:39 AM


nice good write and welcome to passsions, i am looking forward to reading more of your work
Skoota
Junior Member
since 2000-12-23
Posts 28
Australia
3 posted 2001-01-16 09:23 AM


As Ginners has said Welcome to Passions.

You will find that this is a world created by words, filled with anything your imagination can conjure.
A world of darkness and gloom
As well as romance and love
Filling each room

Ahem, well, yes.

A brilliant poem, please write more, share your gift with us.

Sim

The Gloomy One

Come to me
Kill for me
Worship me.
Follow everthing I do
Act it out before me

Godhead - The Reckoning

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