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I Love You
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I Love You |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
Incredible visions are what I see Longing to have you next to me Oceans of love I'll wash over thee Vibrant and beautiful colors you'll see Everything feeling the way it should be You in my arms at sunset with me Only our love can set our souls free Under the tree I wait for thee G. A. Webb Regret not that which you have done, |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
 I like this one very much. I love reading poetry with the classic rhythm and feel to it. Enjoyed very much With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Nice, very nice. Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
Thank you two so much, I'm glad you liked this. I kinda had fun with it. I put a subliminal message in this. Did you see it? Here's a hint, I put the title in the piece, see if you or anybody else who reads this can find it. Thanks again! G Regret not that which you have done, |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Hope she meets you under your tree!! *smiles* *War produces one thing - Cemetaries. And in cemetaries there are no enemies!* |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
very nice, loved the rhyme and flow, and yes I see the I love you! awesome. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
This is very good. I love the rythm. Good luck in finding that person.. --Marie It's true that we don't know what we've got until we lose it, but it's also true that we don't know what we've been missing until it arrives. |
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svandersaar Junior Member
since 2001-01-15
Posts 40 |
This is so sweet!  Stacey |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Acrostically speaking, it's very good...(I found it!) |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
Thank you all so much. I'm glad you liked this little piece. G Regret not that which you have done, |
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