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WinterTalon
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since 2001-01-14
Posts 141
Brooksville, KY, USA

0 posted 2001-01-15 03:26 PM


The shattering of broken heart echoes through my mind.
The cruelty and the bitterness shall be returned in kind.
I let the fading light receed far from my withered soul.
The hatred and the blaming lies have now taken their toll.
There is an empty, hollow place where once a heart did hide.
I've cried my bitter, angry tears, so now I weep inside.
My heart's been broken beyond repair so now I only wait;
I listen and I watch for Death to come fulfill my fate...


~The hardest thing is watching the one you love... love someone else.~


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Dark_kisses_Within
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since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas
1 posted 2001-01-15 04:42 PM


Excellent post here! And yea thats how I feel now also.  

Mags


No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry


Ginners
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since 2000-07-22
Posts 339
Mullica Hill, New Jersey
2 posted 2001-01-15 05:12 PM


this was very good and i think that every one has felt this way, i know i have, but never let it get you down and know that something or someone better may be just around your corner (yeah yeah sappy happy [profanity deleted], i know what you are thinking, but it is true, just wait and open yourself up)

Ginners, I edited out the swearword as it goes against the guidelines, and philosophy of passions. Thanks

Severn

[This message has been edited by Severn (edited 01-16-2001).]

catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
3 posted 2001-01-15 06:50 PM


Oh yeah, I have been there too, and you expressed it so well. Plese remember there is always a future, as long as we welcome it.
Take care. You write beautifully, of painful things.
Sandra

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