Dark Poetry #3 |
Angels in Heaven |
Temptress*Moon Member
since 2001-01-15
Posts 240Long Island, NY |
I Knocked on heaven's gates One to many times The Angels sent me back, telling Me it wasn't my time The pain that i endure subsides Deep to the core I Honestly can't fight this pain Anymore So easy i give up, Iv'e lost all sense of hope The Demons have captured My heart and my soul But the Angels above won't let them win They are the only thing keeping my feet on this earth! Danyel L. Azar 3/30/01
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Interesting format and thought process. Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
I thought this was so beautifully written, taken directly from a sad, frail soul? I wish you well, take care......Sue Suetang |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Interesting and enjoyable to read...James |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Very interesting... Thanks for sharing. --Marie It's true that we don't know what we've got until we lose it, but it's also true that we don't know what we've been missing until it arrives. |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
Yes, God is good, but it's nice to have an angel around too. Good work. |
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mc Member
since 1999-11-16
Posts 67México |
Hope lies beneath ourselves, don't let despair win you over.... I liked the way it was written. |
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Ginners Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339Mullica Hill, New Jersey |
Ttemp- wonderful as always, the one thing i missed most about passions was your exceptional writting - Gin "I'll build a wall if we can keep them on the other side"---NIN |
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Temptress*Moon Member
since 2001-01-15
Posts 240Long Island, NY |
Ginners, Thanks Hon for the compliment*S* I haven't been around here much... kind of lost the Nitch for writing recently
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