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Temptress*Moon
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since 2001-01-15
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0 posted 2001-03-30 11:18 PM




I Knocked on heaven's gates
One to many times
The Angels sent me back, telling
Me it wasn't my time
The pain that i endure subsides
Deep to the core
I Honestly can't fight this pain
Anymore
So easy i give up, Iv'e lost all sense of hope
The Demons have captured My heart and my soul
But the Angels above won't let them win
They are the only thing keeping my feet on this earth!
Danyel L. Azar
3/30/01


I slept and dreamed that life was beauty was thy dream then a shadowy lie? -ESH-

© Copyright 2001 Danyel L. Azar - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
1 posted 2001-03-31 05:58 AM


Interesting format and thought process.
Kethry

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.



Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
2 posted 2001-03-31 07:27 AM


I thought this was so beautifully written, taken directly from a sad, frail soul? I wish you well, take care......Sue

Suetang

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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3 posted 2001-03-31 08:23 AM


Interesting and enjoyable to read...James
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4 posted 2001-03-31 04:06 PM


Very interesting... Thanks for sharing.

--Marie

It's true that we don't know what we've got until we lose it, but it's also true that we don't know what we've been missing until it arrives.

mirror man
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since 2001-01-08
Posts 814

5 posted 2001-04-01 03:22 AM


Yes, God is good, but it's nice to have an angel around too.  Good work.
mc
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since 1999-11-16
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México
6 posted 2001-04-01 03:29 AM


Hope lies beneath ourselves, don't let despair win you over....
I liked the way it was written.

Ginners
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since 2000-07-22
Posts 339
Mullica Hill, New Jersey
7 posted 2001-04-21 10:29 PM


Ttemp-  wonderful as always,  the one thing i missed most about passions was your exceptional writting

- Gin  

"I'll build a wall if we can keep them on the other side"---NIN
"There is no always forever, just this"-the cure

Temptress*Moon
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since 2001-01-15
Posts 240
Long Island, NY
8 posted 2001-04-22 10:14 AM


Ginners,
Thanks Hon for the compliment*S*
I haven't been around here much...   kind of lost the Nitch for writing  
recently  


I slept and dreamed that life was beauty was thy dream then a shadowy lie? -ESH-

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