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insect
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since 2000-04-22
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0 posted 2001-03-29 12:28 PM


For Luci

You’ve entered my world of mind and soul
Jumped the cracks but fell in the hole
My deep, deep cave
Endless caverns of misbehave

I’m your Darkness full of pleasure
A shadow-guarded treasure
Riches of dynamic weave
Your body wont believe

A mind dimensional trip
No hands to give you a grip
Just open your soul up wide
And let me climb inside

Not just a visit of alien thoughts
But a Satanic invasion that rots  
Disguised by a Devilish charm
Tripping your intellectual alarm

You run to a happy place
Only arriving to see my face
Bouncing like a laser in your mirror
The reflection of Evil becomes clearer

You’ve got the Devil in you
Something you always knew
You’ve lost control
When you sold your soul

And I’m not giving it back…ever!

                                                                                         Darkness



© Copyright 2001 insect - All Rights Reserved
Swamp¤Faeryie
Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 393
fairyland....of course;)
1 posted 2001-03-29 01:38 PM


ooooh this makes me think of dracula...dracula always has his Lucy you know...this was scrumptiously dark and bothersome. loved it!!

p.s.edisni livedeht htiw nevaeh niehs siyhw?

sammi


much madness is divinest sense,and much sense the starkest madness~Emily Dickinson

[This message has been edited by Swamp¤Faeryie (edited 03-29-2001).]

insect
Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014

2 posted 2001-04-02 12:41 PM


Swamp#Faeryie…Thank you
                               Glad Darkness pulled you in.
                               For Luci = Lucifer…………..
                               Just a trick name that Satan is
                               hiding behind.                              
                               “Nevaeh ni tra ohw” are the Devil’s
                               words.
                               This is part of a series of poems this
                               one being number two, number one
                               is “REHTAF RUO”…. more to come
                               later.
                               Dracula is quit the Dark character too!
                               I love all the Vampire stuff too!
                               Thanks again for seeing the Dark!
                                
                               “bothersome” ~ Love it ~

SpitFire
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since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

3 posted 2001-04-02 12:51 PM


~A satanic invasion? Eek Insect! How truly evil of you. Ha. Deliciously dark reading.  Enjoyed this and the first one. Looking forward to the next. Take care you. *Peace.
svandersaar
Junior Member
since 2001-01-15
Posts 40

4 posted 2001-04-02 01:01 AM


COOL! Interesting title, too.  

Stacey

insect
Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014

5 posted 2001-04-02 10:42 PM


FireSpit…My Evil Goddess of Fire burning brilliantly
                 bright!……..BURN ME BABY!!

svandersaar…Thanks for coming down!
    
WELCOME TO PASSIONS HELL


                                                    

Panne447
Member
since 2001-04-03
Posts 196
S.A. TX
6 posted 2001-04-04 08:19 AM


Insect, Wondeful read. Thanks. Panne
Swamp¤Faeryie
Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 393
fairyland....of course;)
7 posted 2001-04-04 10:20 PM


oooooh now i see.

livewoh

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