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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia 
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
I certainly hope that this wasn't a personal account. This is a sad story, that someone would hurt themselves in this way. I care and no one should have to hurt this much.. Love is what the world needs.. Well written poem. |
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Jellybean King Member
since 2001-03-07
Posts 153Jelly, Bean |
Great job in exploring how inner suffering manifests itself in the outward..anorexia...interesting and sad how a "starvation" of love results in a starvation of the body and spirit...moving and sad...especially the end: ================================ I need you to love me, to say that you care, On you I can depend to always be there. Why was I chosen to suffer like this, And why can't I see in the end I'll be missed? Why? ================================= Jellybean King |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
great expression of pain and inner turmoil, of knowing the facts for as wrong as they are, but still depending on the wrong, anyway. And the cry for help is just powerful. Great job, if indeed this is coming out of personal account, dear friend, keep writing them out! Take care, smiles  With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I too certainly hope you aren't describing yourself in this scenario, if you are, get help and get it now! Great descriptions of the inner turmoil all those bulimia and anorexic women face daily.. well done! Isis *War produces one thing - Cemetaries. And in cemetaries there are no enemies!* |
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Swamp¤Faeryie Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 393fairyland....of course;) |
this was just incredibly well done. You handle the subject perfectly,and write it well. bravo!! sammi much madness is divinest sense,and much sense the starkest madness~Emily Dickinson |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I too thought this was well done! "I've done all the dumb things"....Paul Kelly |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
so many times we want to put ourselves into a category, be what everyone else wants us to be, my best advise is to make yourself happy, to anyone that suffers from anorexia, or any eating disorder. The only way to live is to seek help. This is not something you can handle on your own. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Interesting...it seems when I ask questions I do recieve answers...not always the ones I expected...but answers and understanding do have their day...James |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
painful poem, but I agree with the others seek if it's real some help or if you can't do that at least tell someone you trust to help you through it and not condemn you. If it is true here is a site that may understand and be able to offer help. http://www.anad.org/ Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Wow!--Very touching poem--so sad though--i hope you are alright--I'm always here to talk if u need it--LOVE ELMO <3 |
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mc Member
since 1999-11-16
Posts 67México |
Strong, sad and lonely... And if it counts: Please seek help don't give up, all right? |
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