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Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member

since 2000-03-21

Posts 680
Kansas

0 posted 2001-01-15 12:49 PM

Slowly the sun sets
As the day comes to an end
The beautiful colors sparkle
Warmth it does send
Watching the sunset
Knowing it will be gone
Never being able to touch it
Yet feeling the vibes so strong
The sadness over comes you
The loneliness over rides
Tears drop from your face
In comes the high tides

but then comes .....

The stars that sparkle
So ever bright
Each one smiles at you
Giving you lasting light
Wishing upon the first
And the many that seem to fall
You wish with all your might
Hoping they hear your call

No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry

G. A. Webb
Member

since 2000-01-21

Posts 441
Stanton, California, USA

1 posted 2001-01-15 01:41 AM

Hi Mags! This was great! I liked how you added a healing element to it. Aren't the stars just wonderful. How many times I've wished upon them. Thank you for sharing this piece.

G

Regret not that which you have done,
Rather that which you haven't

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

2 posted 2001-01-15 07:31 AM

I love that - wanting the stars to hear...I wonder if they do?

K

Strokes of ink, words, dreams like
Waking mountains make intimate conversations
With my shadow

From 'Words in the Night' by Jeff Geddes

WinterTalon
Member

since 2001-01-14

Posts 141
Brooksville, KY, USA

3 posted 2001-01-15 11:26 AM

Beautiful... just beautiful.

~What is sometimes viewed as an ending, is often a new beginning.~

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

4 posted 2001-01-15 06:52 PM

Nice way of imparting hope into the whole sordid mess of life.

Ha, I'm not depressed..
This was great Mags, truly enjoyed.
Sandra

Joel the wolf
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 1333
Angels Camp

5 posted 2001-01-16 09:10 AM

Living in the hills I have a great view of the stars, and the sunsets are great, like this poem, you have expressed it so beautifully.

Joel.

I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

firecrakker
Member

since 2000-10-20

Posts 235
Virginia

6 posted 2001-01-16 09:43 AM

I have to agree with G.A. I like how this poem moves from bittersweet to hopeful. Another great one!

Sheila

Verve
Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 348
Singapore

7 posted 2001-01-16 02:34 PM

This was a really lovely piece ... and i have always had this thing for stars ...

I really liked this one.
Nice work.

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