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Just A Woman
Senior Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 507

0 posted 2001-03-22 12:25 PM

In dark of night, I chase the moon
My body yearning for it's tune

that whispers of a fairy tale
the tourquoise waters I could sail

The stars that I could dance upon
then gracefully become the dawn

A dream as old as time must be
to rise above humanity

I'd like to say that it's not me
in love with that old fantasy

It wasn't my heart, disgraced me so
forgot the rules old bruises show

For "love" stands right here in my life
and owned by him, I am his wife

"When people show you who they are, believe them"

~Maya Angelou~

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

1 posted 2001-03-22 01:03 AM

Powerful words, powerful words...

thanks for posting here JaW...

K

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2001-03-22 01:01 PM

I must concur with K on that one. . . these are excellent. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Lady Bere
Member

since 2000-02-03

Posts 73
Valmeyer, Illinois USA

3 posted 2001-03-23 12:25 PM

Wow! This is great. A beautifully written piece.

Without darkness there is no light
Without the light we cannot see the dark
Balance...It heals the soul -- by: LB

Just A Woman
Senior Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 507

4 posted 2001-03-23 06:51 AM

Thank you so much, Severn, Sven and Lady Bere!

"When people show you who they are, believe them"

~Maya Angelou~

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

5 posted 2001-03-24 04:21 PM

strong poem, and deeply moving.
write on
Kethry

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.

bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

6 posted 2001-04-08 03:23 PM

very wonderfully choosen words, and placement.
Bernie
A smile a day keeps the world

'g.
just might have to bump wake you, but then again, coffee will do..... chuckle, chuckle.

Bernie Slicker

S Arthur Grey
Senior Member

since 2001-03-19

Posts 719
woven by a poet's loom

7 posted 2001-04-09 12:34 PM

Oh, but you can sail those tourquoise waters, J A W, so long as you don't remain standing still. Steal away and fly across those waves!
It need not be a fairy tale . . .

S Arthur

Whose Night is this, Mine or the Moon's?
J.E.James

[This message has been edited by S Arthur Grey (edited 04-09-2001).]

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