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Kaneix
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since 2001-03-17
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0 posted 2001-03-19 05:45 PM


They felt the Earth around them
Living
They took from her only what was needful
They were respectful

They were proud
With just cause

When they killed it was with dignity
For the creature and for themselves
They lived on the land
And with it as one
They lived in harmony with the seasons
In harmony with nature

Those that came and destroyed them
saw the land as other
A wild thing to be tamed or exploited
The animals they saw as pests or plentiful meat
They saw they could PROFIT from the land
They used it, they beat it down,
They burned, blasted and built on it
They raped it

And in two hundred years and more
They have no more dignity now than then
Their greedy eyes are still on fire
Exploiting any natural thing
and bending it to their will
To profit from its death

Having no soul now to lose
they justify every disrespectful act
as a another part of glorious Amerika

The killers see themselves as saints
The stupid see themselves as smart
The sleazy see themselves as spiritual
The barbarians see themselves as civilized
The unlearned see themselves as teachers
The bringers of violence see themselves as peacemakers
The perpetrators of terror see themselves as victims

The horror of their ignorance is complete

Amerikan Savages

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Marian's Lover
Junior Member
since 2001-03-05
Posts 15

1 posted 2001-03-19 10:22 PM


Well done, friend - you said it all.
Bloody Amerikkkans.

The only guarantee in Life, is Death. - The Lord Buddha

Marian's Lover
Junior Member
since 2001-03-05
Posts 15

2 posted 2001-03-19 10:22 PM


Well done, friend - you said it all.
Bloody Amerikkkans.

The only guarantee in Life, is Death. - The Lord Buddha

DJLI
Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 237
TN, USA
3 posted 2001-03-19 10:47 PM


ouch...

P.L.U.R.

coyote
Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077

4 posted 2001-03-19 11:48 PM


Very true words. Yet, what is gone, is gone forever.
Explore the invisible, for it is always there.
Thanks, and good job.

"The poet is the priest of the invisible."
Wallace Stevens

G. A. Webb
Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441
Stanton, California, USA
5 posted 2001-03-20 12:55 PM


First of all, I welcome you (along with everybody else) to dark passions. This was great, I really liked it. It reminds me of one I wrote and posted recently called Battle's Eve on the same subject matter. It's in Dark #3 a few weeks back if your interested. I think you might like it.

Anyways, once again, this was a great post, thank you. Keep'm com'n!

G

Regret not that which you have done,
Rather that which you haven't


Kaneix
Junior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 15

6 posted 2001-03-20 12:55 PM


Thanks all - appreciate the welcome ;D
Deranger
Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498
Somewhere, between here and there
7 posted 2001-03-26 11:55 PM


Regrets pass like bricks through the bowels...

Spreading insanity, one post at a time

My skull has glowing green eyes

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
8 posted 2001-03-27 10:13 AM


"The horror of their ignorance is complete."
This makes lots of sense...James

dragonpoe
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since 2000-11-12
Posts 608
Palm Bay, Florida
9 posted 2001-03-27 03:39 PM


great write, raw and powerful and so bitterly true! Enjoyed the read very much.

With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
dragonpoe

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