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how it hits home |
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carolinadreams Member
since 2000-07-20
Posts 142 |
i'd simply ask a trucker to get there i'd simply walk the whole way i'd simply chance being killed i'd simply camp out for days i'd simply fight off crap i'd forget my fear of cars i'd forget the scars i'd forget how far i'd forget just so far in a car i'd not remember much i'd not remember stuff i'd not remember not enough i'd forget my train i'd forget loving it again i'd forget taking a train i'd not be on the next one i'd enjoy every second in the air i'd love flying for a second to spare i'd be ready to be scared i'd already known he'd cared i'd insist on what he wanted i'd come to him without a tear i'd go again year after year but when we find speculation useless again when we don't freeze reality it hits home sometimes quietly [This message has been edited by Isis (edited 03-12-2001).] |
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Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
It does, doesn't it? Really nice write, Carolinadreams. After years of searching, I have found I am nothing more, nothing less...I am in truth Just A Woman after all. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
It does hit home doesn't it hon, loud or soft it still hits... The use of *** is a no no, so I changed it slightly  I know you won't mind, it doesn't change the meaning of the line at all..Keep in touch eh? *hugs* Isis *War produces one thing - Cemetaries. And in cemetaries there are no enemies!* ~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit. |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Interesting repition. I liked this, good poem.  Jenn "I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia |
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