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Dark Poetry #3

the vampire conversion

Brigid WillowKeeper
Member

since 2003-08-24

Posts 88
OHIO IN USA

0 posted 2003-09-13 09:35 PM

Another metal song by me

Gazing into a mirror
What dost thou see?
You see me?
I see me too
But where are you?

You walk alone
in the dark cold night
No one ever knows you're there
but me.

You don't eat
lest not in front of me
but the day will come
when you drink my blood.

This day hath come
but you save me
if I die you die too.
The deed hath been done.

Gazing into the mirror.
What dost I see?
I see you
you see you too...

But Where Am I?

[This message has been edited by Brigid WillowKeeper (09-13-2003 09:36 PM).]

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

1 posted 2003-09-13 09:39 PM

hmm . . . I would think you were right by his side there . . . and didnt think that if chosen, death occurred.

Vamps huh?
nicely put
xxoo

mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

2 posted 2003-09-14 10:00 PM

Nice metaphorical write. Enjoyed the path of deepness here.

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

Brigid WillowKeeper
Member

since 2003-08-24

Posts 88
OHIO IN USA

3 posted 2003-09-15 09:54 PM

Thanks all, mysticpoe, I love the screename

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

4 posted 2003-09-18 02:03 AM

everywhere...good write

"For those who understand you, no explanation is necessary. For those who don't, none is possible."

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