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ForeverPoetic
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since 2003-09-05
Posts 28
Streaming down a tranquil sea

0 posted 2003-09-05 12:29 PM



"Hey this poem may be short, but i believe that even a short poem can be just as effective as any other, and make that person think and realize. I hope you like it:P"


Forever seeking the truth behind your individuality
I ponder

Will my dreams become reality?
I wonder

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teenpoet
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since 2001-10-17
Posts 280
Michigan
1 posted 2003-09-05 03:53 PM


I ponder and wonder much the same.

I am the Blue~Phoenix and I don't care what you say that won't change. I am who I am as you are who you are.

SharaRose
Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~
2 posted 2003-09-05 05:40 PM


A question, I have a feeling, is shared by many. I loved the truth in these few words!

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Lexy
Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038
California
3 posted 2003-09-05 10:59 PM


I like it, I think you could definately expand on your thoughts though.
Welcome to passions!
Lex

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