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san
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since 2003-08-24
Posts 5


0 posted 2003-08-24 09:16 PM



Some times there r stars sparkling up the galaxy
Some times there r tears trickling down your cheeks
Some times there is happiness bursting you through
Some times there’s a sorrow deep down inside of you

So you see some times, this some times happens-
When you can’t carry long with your happiness
And some times, this some times happens-
When bad times alter to gladness

All of it is just a mere game
In which all of us are taking part in
Whatever u're going through, is just for some time
So whatever that gets new for u,consider it a divine

What you consider a long period
It’s is actually a little time
Just don’t let go the patience in you
& See how the rough turns to fine

Just ponder over this some time
And I bet
You won’t get near the decline.  

© Copyright 2003 san - All Rights Reserved
littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
1 posted 2003-08-24 11:12 PM


san!
Welcome - what an uplifting write!
My oh My , why is this in Dark?
a lamp to light the way . . .
xxoo

SharaRose
Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~
2 posted 2003-08-25 05:32 PM


I loved the tone of this write. It's as if an angel was there to whisper to all who read...Keep your head up...all is on the horizon for you, for the change you need." How beautiful is that. WOW...I loved this!
Thanks for sharing this.. )

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

mysticpoe
Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883

3 posted 2003-08-25 09:04 PM


A very nice follow thru of thoughts to hold on to. Did a very good job conveying. Nice wite. Enjoyed.

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

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