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green_itchy_stuff
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0 posted 2003-08-18 10:13 PM



Missmatched turn of sides
A feeling of weekness hides
Struggle and proper
Schedule accident

Give up, give in
Submissive passions hault
A narrow corner
Where I lay

Stretch and arrange
Single shot, feel deranged
Tie the knot and dedicate
The greed of honesty

Surrender
I quit

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

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inkedgoddess
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1 posted 2003-08-18 11:19 PM


Surrender
I quit

i hate rules too..........

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2 posted 2003-08-19 12:27 PM


Great write, GIS..
green_itchy_stuff
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3 posted 2003-08-19 12:49 PM


thanx guys.  its basically about giving up.

GIS

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

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