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Flat Natural Ego
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Flat Natural Ego |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Domination simple Granted and taken Better than the monkey All alive and set in rank Class low and high Nature blind see it as it is Point and arrow Canine instinct chase the squirrel Innanimate dare to move Nothing special Nothing to brag about The way it is Blind and dumb Intelligence not required Ignorant and proven Just another animal Destructive and wasteful With our own ways as well _________________ I went for a walk and noticed how dogs barked at me as if i were just another animal. Then i thought about the way they knew how to sneak up on me. They knew to get behind me, and clearly knew where my power of site was. It was just kind of weird. a trickle of music from a well |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
thought provoking indeed. I always think about weird stuff like that. I haven't taken a walk in a couple of weeks actually for just that reason, I think too much about stuff most people wouldn't take note of. I usually come back depressed and write a poem of this sort. Great write. Lex  |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
greeny you are better than some animal, but nice write, but is it not funny how dogs have such a sense it is kind of strange..nice write "in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums" |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Actually we, humans are part of the animal kingdom. lol Its like dogs just see something move and dont even register what it is and go after it. It felt like I was no different from a car or something... Oh well. It makes for a nice poem. Just using the thought with imagination. I walk alot actually, just it was different today. Thanx eor. I know Im not just another animal. I can reason. GIS a trickle of music from a well |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Wow I'm glad I came here, because now I know I'm not the only one that thinks in abstract tones. hehehe I kinda like that myself. Not being cookie cutter, and a carbon copy of something, or someone else. Don't think so! What's that Homey the clown on "In Living Color" used to say "Homey don't play dat! gigglesssssssssss!  SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
thanx shara. I just write and dont really care to make it like anybody else's stuff. And Homey wont play that. hehe GIS a trickle of music from a well |
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