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Dark Poetry #3

Bleeding Innocence

Arapax
New Member

since 2003-08-13

Posts 1

0 posted 2003-08-13 11:32 AM

Bleeding Innocence

Blood flows over darkened paths
Wiping tears through shouting laughs
Flickering blades over naked skin
The bleeding innocence comes from within

Heatened shivers can't take freezing heights
Burning mountains unleash losing fights
Hatred feelings can't feel loving sin
And the bleeding innocence comes from within

Better feel alone that feel lost together
Loving words compare hating signs forever
Only hate gets out and hate gets in
But the bleeding innocence comes from within

Hope y'all like it

Tequilia_Sunrise
Senior Member

since 2003-02-19

Posts 612
Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada

1 posted 2003-08-13 11:39 AM

Very good write! Wellcome to passions!

Tequilia

Lexia
Member

since 2003-07-20

Posts 111
Nowhere

2 posted 2003-08-13 11:48 AM

Interesting write. Welcome to passions.

Lex

You may only be one person to the world, but you may also be the world to one person.

Lil OnE
Member

since 1999-12-14

Posts 234
Pasco County. Fl.

3 posted 2003-08-13 11:17 PM

I don't know about anybody else, but damn did this give me goose bumps!! I know all too well how you feel, and you captured the feeling amazingly. I loved this piece to pieces!! Great read and a big fat welcome!!

"No man is EVER worth my tears, and the only one who is will never make me cry"
~Lil OnE!~

ShadowRaven
Member

since 2003-08-13

Posts 51

4 posted 2003-08-13 11:49 PM

oooh - I love it! Gave me shivers!

Raven

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