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Dark Poetry #3

Yawning

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2003-08-10 05:42 PM

Yawning
to see more
of all I am tired of seeing

A stir
within all that has not moved
for weeks
sensing presence, feeling nothing

does that make sense?

Behind the dye
lives luxurious brown natural
growing out peroxide
that pleased you

Two sets
of handwriting among kept
unopened envelopes
weakened by what it once said.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

Third Libra
Member

since 2003-08-10

Posts 125
South Carolina

1 posted 2003-08-10 06:02 PM

Good stuff. Another great poem within this forum (I think I'mma like this place). Thanks for lettin' me read.

Love is only an excuse to hurt and to get hurt... Knowledge brings ye fear.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

2 posted 2003-08-10 08:42 PM

Ohh gem . . . all the sense in the world . . . hugs to you m'lady . . .
xxoo

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

3 posted 2003-08-11 10:38 PM

Aye i likeyou dark..send some pics with the new do btw!

mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

4 posted 2003-08-12 09:49 AM

I enjoyed the style of the write. Like surfing, waiting for the wave to kick you in the ass. Nice write gem.

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

5 posted 2003-08-12 06:44 PM

...Amazing

blackhalo
Member

since 2000-02-15

Posts 467
Denver, CO

6 posted 2003-08-12 06:53 PM

all too well, my dear, all too well...
Congrats on a wonderful write.

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