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Goodbye...... From, tom tom ...............to eloise
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Goodbye...... From, tom tom ...............to eloise |
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Gavin Junior Member
since 2003-06-22
Posts 47 |
Obsession. Follow a track and never fall back until the day, the day of attack Conscience to conscience it’s never wrong to be right You pursue the pursued just to know you were right You needed the truth you needed the past You couldn’t move from the noose so you tightened its grasp Why can’t you move forward, move on and let go Why do seek this woman of myth, this one you’ll never know You’re far past denial and over the brink You think she’s still alive and well, while you bruise your head with the kitchen sink Trying and fighting, to forget and forgive You remember her jumping with no more life to live But how can this be, how can she be gone I didn’t mean the tings I said, I even swore I was wrong I said I was sorry, I begged and sighed But when she leapt from the ledge, I couldn’t even bring myself to cry No. NO!......she isn’t gone I screamed My blood turned poisoned as I fell back in dream I dreamed of world, where life would be fair where I could have my happy ending an no one would care no one would be cheated and all would know possession my love and my life is handed over unseeded alive and without .obsession. *um, this is from a movie called "the million dollar hotel," well not the poem but it was inspired by the movie, anyways i doubt anyone has seen it but if you have then these are my thoughts on what would happen if thier roles were reversed* |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
Enjoyed the read. mysticpoe If nothing is something |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Nope I havent seen the movie, but nice write anyway. a trickle of music from a well |
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