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BitterSmoke
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since 2001-01-02
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0 posted 2001-03-02 12:11 PM



I had to edit this somewhat to remove profanity and the like, please forgive my incompleteness of this chore...This is a response to a poem entited "lithium barbie doll" that was posted here about a month or so ago.
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Why are we still playing this useless useless game?
Seems like an issue I should have worked out in high school like everyone else, but in my fourth year of a physics degree I still am getting caught in the question that has no plausible answer.
Why do we insist on being a society without meaning, without purpose, without a god, and why in heavens name should I not crawl into the soft cushion of my mind and dream of god. Seems like we all had this question at one point, and then we all gave up and started drinking.

>I am sick and tired of last minute solutions to impossible problems
-unknown
>The intergration of a cube will demonstrate god
-unknown

>What else do I have but my own mind?
>Forgive me if I curl up in myself
>Excuse me if pornography is meaningless
When I can do unto thy self
>
>Narcissistic necessity, warmth of a vacuum
>Time and space spinning in 3 dimensions- looking for god
>Can I not create my own reality?
>Can I not integrate a cube?
>
>Wood spirits, floating balls of energy
> Colossal wars- who is the bad guy, not me!
>Throw your mind into a wolf, look at yourself
> What do you see? What if you see nothing?
>
>Lay on your back, float up in the smoke
> Feel the mountain below
>Feel sky above
> Draw it up into you, spinning 3d vectors
>
>Compromise your soul, buy a lottery ticket
> For the price of your family blood
>Compromise your life, become nothing
> Become a shuffler, my phone bill is $34.67
>
>Become what I hate, too save what I love
> But in hating what I have become,
>I have forgotten what I love
> They ask me if I have found Jesus, ha!
>
>Danger, sex. Can I forget she has a father?
> No, but what if I could? Could I rape a mother?
>The mother's son is a rapist, where does leave me?
> I am left no choice but to crawl into my mind.
>
>3d vectors spinning, Can I not integrate a cube?
> Are we not all of the opinion that we are somehow special?
>Somehow, yet each one of us is just an oppressor with an angle
> Spinning 3d vectors of space and time
> If I integrate a cube will I lose my mind?

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[This message has been edited by Isis (edited 03-02-2001).]

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Isis
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1 posted 2001-03-02 10:57 PM


I read Lithium Barbie Doll a while ago, and now your response with this..
It is very well done hon full of thoughts, possibilities, karma, consequences and the like.
But knowing our guidelines I did change that one little sentence, that myself and another moderator found troublesome. It has not changed the meaning of your sentence or verse at all.
If you have a problem feel free to email me..
Great response hon..

Isis

*War produces one thing - Cemetaries. And in cemetaries there are no enemies!*
~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit.



Dopey Dope
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2 posted 2001-03-03 12:20 PM


Wowish, nicely done here.....can't say much more.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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