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tom waits
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since 2003-07-20
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0 posted 2003-07-22 06:01 AM



excite:

in the middle of a park
i sat in somber need of inhabition.

over time,
i saw myself needing somebody,
then somebody came.

i, soon realizing, that there was no one...
no one could make me feel better,
only i can do that.

it is a strange thing
to realize you are alone at all times,
you could be surounded by people,
never knowing you are without.

in the middle of a park
i sat alone,
waiting for someone
someone never came,
but i found myself.


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Silent Evincar
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since 2003-07-22
Posts 179
Here There and Places Between
1 posted 2003-07-22 01:54 PM


What a frustrating way to experience the way to ones self. Its gives me a visual of a little boy in a candy store who never had a mommie but has lost something anyway. Nice.

                       NJS

tom waits
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since 2003-07-20
Posts 18

2 posted 2003-07-24 03:27 AM


hmm, interesting visual. thank you.
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