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Inside Penalty |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Trapped behind a curtain I can't seem to escape Shallow moral judgement Describes my very shape Relax, take it slow and full A needle in my back Hair line fractured skull And roses in a stack I saw her for a reason Shes laughing with a stench A situation just the same I was innocent a pinch Almost attempt free I fled Precise blessed her pearl gate Dirty magnet atmosphere Internal form cited hate Pretended rapid movement Inertia wind at none Beauty in illegal lust Revolutions of the sun I chose my response Write it down on steel And suffer eternal death Fearless is what I feel ------------------ open for comments |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
nice write, powerful, great metaphores and imagery... |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
thanks eor i enjoy your writes as well |
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