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Dark Poetry #3

Poison Pen

Chameleon
Member

since 2002-08-07

Posts 99
Australia

0 posted 2003-06-27 10:45 AM

Poison Pen

Falling into this abyss,
into this web of pure disaster.
All i miss, a sincere kiss.
The refuge in feeling warm.

I am no one,
besides I am as lost as from the lure of azaria.

This poison pen,
infecting every word that i try to express.
This  acidic wash impeding my senseless waning flow.

I am no one,
besides no one sees me in my transparency.
No one can hold me,
because i only just dissolve, (severed moulds).

I am no one special,
As I am as lost in the lure of azaria.

Dragon Mistress
Member

since 2002-08-26

Posts 289
Washington, USA.

1 posted 2003-06-27 04:25 PM

Oh, wow. This is truly something.
Tanya

~*~I'm only a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

2 posted 2003-06-28 03:05 PM

Nicholas:

your pen sure doesnt seem poison to me
nice job
xxoo

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

3 posted 2003-06-28 04:23 PM

nice write, great imagery, i liked this piece a lot...

Mad_Hatter
Member

since 2003-06-29

Posts 393
Canada

4 posted 2003-06-29 07:40 PM

Great poem. The imagery given by the poisonous pen I found very unique and original..keep it up

Chameleon
Member

since 2002-08-07

Posts 99
Australia

5 posted 2003-07-01 03:52 AM

thanks guys, i really appreciate your comments.

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