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since 2002-07-01
Posts 286
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0 posted 2003-06-20 03:32 PM


If I am white
My life is black
My pain is novocane
Frustration a crimsion flame ignites me
Black mixes with white
Pain mixes with crimsion
My outcome is clear
Shoot it up


I'm just kickin it up

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Forgotenandgone
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since 2003-05-07
Posts 52
NC
1 posted 2003-06-21 01:33 AM


That is very cool...i like it and also how you referace backk...

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Please dont cry when i die
For i will be whatching in heaven
and i dont want it to rain on my funeral...

click1
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since 2003-03-25
Posts 152
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2 posted 2003-06-23 09:21 PM


Art with words.. Looks cool and sounds great..

Click

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