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ObeyYourGoldfish
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since 2003-05-18
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0 posted 2003-05-18 05:27 PM


Seeing the pain and sorrow,
You and me we sit and scream,
We dont want to see tomorrow
All the people who be so mean
I face this world of pain and anger
I dont believe people dont see
They dont see the pain, they dont see the danger
Told to buckle up, to cheer up
Told war is nessacary it has to be done
I believe it for the higher authority, them and their tea cup.
They sit in comfty chairs, they wont be undone
Friends, Family, Strangers sent to fight
Why doesnt the higher authority go?
I wish they would, with all my might
I think this is some sick show
Blood and bodies of the innocent
Why'd we let this anger grow?
People are fighting, no reason to be permitted
Why cant we stop this blood shed?
Its like a disease, quickly transmitted
Look at the world, look at all the dead.
This needs to be stopped, its a worthless cause
No more pain and sorrow
This is a war without cause
I dont wan to see tomorrow
The world we will obliberate
We use bio nucleur weapons against each other,
To much hate
One country will die after another
We will slaughter each other till nothings left
Theres so much pain and sorrow.
Continously we will kill eaach other
I dont want to see tomorrow
Never will we be family, never my brother
We bitch at each other for using all the resources
We just cant bare to share
You people act so stupid!
Like theres nothing you can do, You cant bare!
Now here i am, you got me started
I cant believe how stupid you act
I cant beleive this pain and sorrow
I think you made a stupid pact,
I dont want to see tomorrow.



Please let me know what you think.
~Breah

[This message has been edited by Nan (05-18-2003 05:49 PM).]

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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2003-05-19 01:45 AM


OK, so let's change it then, one heart at a time, day at a time, one step at a time,
one mind at a time
and hope that we do have...more time

Peace to you. I keep saying that every day.
Peace. And maybe some day we shall see a piece of it.

Local Parasite
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Transylconia, Winnipeg
2 posted 2003-05-19 07:53 AM


Welcome to piptalk.com!

quote:
I believe it for the higher authority, them and their tea cup.
They sit in comfty chairs, they wont be undone
Friends, Family, Strangers sent to fight
Why doesnt the higher authority go?
I wish they would, with all my might


My favourite part.  I like your description of the people with their tea cup and comfy chairs... that can be how it seems at times, with the state of the world... like nobody is willing to listen to what others have to say.  But yes, it can work both ways...

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Parasite

Poets are the unacknowledged legislators of the world.
~Percy Bysshe Shelley

ObeyYourGoldfish
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since 2003-05-18
Posts 12

3 posted 2003-05-19 04:50 PM


Thanks for the feed back,Local Parasite thanks for the email. Im not really sure what else to say so. Peace everyone.

You say Freak like it's a bad thing...
~Breah

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