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Dark Poetry #3

It's Raining Again

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

0 posted 2003-05-18 12:16 PM

how i struggle, awakening
another miserable day
easy way out
long silences, brooding
things i don’t change

how you love
alive in the moment
sensual mystery
creation in motion
feelings and song

how i carry
ugly burdens
wait by the phone
longings and fear
make it all fade

how you cherish
come with me
trust and love
i adore you
why the fear

how i stumble
independence
out of the comfort zone
head held high into the sky
whatever happened to my dignity

it’s raining again

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2003-09-06 02:25 AM

"how i stumble
independence
out of the comfort zone
head held high into the sky
whatever happened to my dignity"

Very deep and strong words.. I love this, muchly.. Saving it. The last lines hit hard.

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

2 posted 2003-09-06 02:32 PM

A little vague, but still a good poem. I liked the title.
~Lex

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

3 posted 2003-09-06 07:25 PM

Very deep and thoughtful, I especially like the observation of rain...almost as an afterthought.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

4 posted 2003-09-06 08:32 PM

oh i know those days.

this was a pleasure to read.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

Mad_Hatter
Member

since 2003-06-29

Posts 393
Canada

5 posted 2003-09-07 01:51 AM

sad how it's always raining inside isn't it? Wonderful poem, you are beautiful for writing it and for wanting something more.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

6 posted 2003-09-07 10:28 AM

Kahlil . . . always a struggle
always a lesson
xxoo

Riley

Senior Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

7 posted 2003-09-07 07:22 PM

great

* the pouring rain kisses my lips with innocence as you look into my eyes *

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