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IcyFlamez89
Member

since 2003-02-14

Posts 292
Jersey City NJ

0 posted 2003-04-12 02:29 PM

This is part of the reason why I have this name:

You see me shiver in the Dark,
Cold and forgotten
Like my heart.
Joy seems to flee from me,
Love always rebukes me,
Even the Light shuns me.
The only comfort is the Night,
Whose subtle coldness holds me tight,
Makes my heart as hard as stone,
And the coldest eyes the world has known.
Pale and whitered is my skin,
Evil shines upon my grin, For she knows I could have been,
Once a happy child.
I am pitied, I am scorned
I am feared and
I am mourned.
But still I find no light.
I have everything but what I've yearned
Which is to let
My spark return, become a
Child of Light.
The closest thing I have for Love
Is the IcyFlamez I'm tired of.
It's gloomy joy,It's freezing heat,
It's empty fire, so bittersweet
But then you came, a Child of light
Your heart so pure, and burning bright.
Your smile so true, your joy so real,
You have everything I cannot feel.
Until you gave it all to me...
So now we're both in Night and Day,
Yin and Yang, as the world would say.
Perfectly balanced in everyway,
So now we are the IcyFlamez.

[This message has been edited by IcyFlamez89 (04-12-2003 02:31 PM).]

rcl 4eva
Junior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 19

1 posted 2003-04-12 06:21 PM

wow, das deep. Who's the spcial person?

MellonCollie
Member

since 2003-04-11

Posts 117
Austria,Europe

2 posted 2003-04-12 06:59 PM

Damn, this really was touching...i felt really sad while reading it...love it

how will i laugh tomorrow
when i can't even smile today

JP
Senior Member

since 1999-05-25

Posts 1343
Loomis, CA

3 posted 2003-04-16 11:20 AM

insightful, well written, darkly enjoyable.

deserves a bumb and some recognition.

Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn.
Nil Desperandum, Fata viem invenient

BrokenDreams
Member

since 2003-02-09

Posts 425
In The Clouds

4 posted 2003-04-16 12:15 PM

Beautifully sad, I felt the whole thing. good write.
Jenni

IcyFlamez89
Member

since 2003-02-14

Posts 292
Jersey City NJ

5 posted 2003-04-16 04:33 PM

Thanx to all who actuall wanted to see the piles of junk I post here, lol (j/k). JP, you always know how to put a smile on someone's face

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