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Dark Poetry #3

Thoughts of You

taramw
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 738

0 posted 2001-02-19 06:05 AM

As the peaceful Pachelbel
awakened, then within;
Thoughts of you assailed me,
sailing, hovering.

Like silk, intertwined,
blowing in the breeze;
Like a gentle wave, softly
lapping, riding the seas.

Heart but surely doth mingle
with mind;
What is to be discovered,
only you and I are to find.

~ Tara ~
4th Feb 2001

may you live all the days of your life. -- jonathan swift

EagleOne
Member Elite

since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

1 posted 2001-02-19 06:24 AM

As I read this I envision a mingling of souls, well done!

"I've done all the dumb things"....Paul Kelly

dragonpoe
Senior Member

since 2000-11-12

Posts 608
Palm Bay, Florida

2 posted 2001-02-19 01:49 PM

I got much the same image as eagleone. Wonderful write! Soft and flowing, enjoyable to read.

With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
dragonpoe

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