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iMMuNe
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since 2002-07-23
Posts 49
Maine, USA

0 posted 2003-01-30 06:41 PM


The pain,
The bleeding,
The deceiving,
You stabbed me with no meaning!

Im hurt,
Im angry,
I churn,
For salvation!

WHY do you try,
To make everyone cry,
Why do you make,
The trouble that makes me break.

Im stabbed through this flesh,
Wounded in the heart,
Mind deceased,
And slipping away...


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Georgia
1 posted 2003-01-31 10:52 AM


I think the feeling of betrayal is something we can relate
GG
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since 2002-12-03
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2 posted 2003-01-31 05:01 PM


ouch, this is a painful one...
but yes I think too many can relate. Though, none can relate in the exact way which you're feeling things.
the stabbing can feel so real...

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

lorenlynn
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since 2003-01-27
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California Beaches
3 posted 2003-02-01 04:37 PM


Been there also. Good write.
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