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moshpit
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since 1999-11-25
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cebu, philippines

0 posted 2001-02-17 08:19 PM




I can no longer blame
You for saying things
That you say for we are
Like mirrors, bouncing off
Each other, while our
Shards--they fall to the
Unfathomable ocean below.
One, but not the same.

© Copyright 2001 guile canencia - All Rights Reserved
Songbird
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since 1999-12-15
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Missouri
1 posted 2001-02-17 09:00 PM


How true this is. It is a good analogy of the hurtful remarks that sometimes are only reactions to frustration and pain of something gone bad in a relationship. I really liked the way you expressed this.
Severn
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since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

2 posted 2001-02-18 12:58 PM


It IS a good analogy...thanks for the read Mosh..

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Ginners
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since 2000-07-22
Posts 339
Mullica Hill, New Jersey
3 posted 2001-02-18 12:43 PM


good read i enjoyed it and how short it was but said so many things

"I'll build a wall if we can keep them on the other side"---NIN
"There is no always forever, just this"-the cure

mirror man
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since 2001-01-08
Posts 814

4 posted 2001-02-19 04:45 PM


Well done. And in so few words. Excellent.
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