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asphyxiation
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0 posted 2003-01-06 05:56 PM



Her divinity reveals and guides my path
Her eyes forever locked upon me
As she shines and observes in the midnight sky

Her light and radiance washes over me
It resuscitates and breathes life back into me
Shows me brightness in my infinite darkness

She glistens and glows and reigns queen
She watches over me, always touching me
Yet juss barely beyond my desperate grasp

Her luminescent self somehow always finds me
Despite the depths of the holes I fall into
She resurrects me from my hollow misery

Her vivid reflections spill all around me
Touching the essence she allows me to bleed
Revives and restores my parting soul

She is my confidant each and every night
I tell her my hidden secrets and buried fears
She’s always there and will never betray

Her illuminating light never abandons me
Every night she is always there when I look up
She openly embraces me into her arms of luminosity

Her brightness cascades around my darkness
She saves me, oh how beautiful she is tonight
My confidant, my guide, my light, my love


8.3.02

breathe out so i can breathe you in

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Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
1 posted 2003-01-17 05:37 AM


asphyxiation,
you make bathing in the moonlight sound as natural as breathing. Wonderful work in particular these two lines.
"Despite the depths of the holes I fall into
She resurrects me from my hollow misery"

Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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