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Dark Poetry #3
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WorrosLanrete
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since 2002-11-14
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0 posted 2002-11-14 07:33 PM


Pray he death that might it come

Yet God hates he and lets it not

Cast this fate then, not worse below

Look above with hate filled eyes

Pray He Death Say Let It Come

-JB
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Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
1 posted 2002-12-07 03:41 PM

All your poetry has this same cadence which makes it easy to read. The message in this one is a bit darker than your others (but then I'm a flowery writer I guess).
WorrosLanrete
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since 2002-11-14
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2 posted 2002-12-07 09:29 PM

Unanswered Prayers =/
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