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Satin Fire |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon 
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Satin fire slips over my skin in a heated caress, the burn of flesh, yet with smooth intoxicate. A silky sear, the peel away of me in the satin fire, exonerates my spirit with it's seductive cleanse. WhiteRose 11/06/02 |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
my guess is that this belongs elsewhere. a quite nice tidbit. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Really? Do you think it erotic in some way? I'm just curious. I find it kind of macabre myself. |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
Satin fire slips over my skin in a heated // satin fire, could be red satin sheets, or clothing. satin is a sensual cloth. caress, the burn of flesh, yet with smooth //heated carress? burn looks like bum in the posted font, and bum of flesh is suggestive intoxicate. A silky sear, the peel away of me in the satin fire, exonerates my spirit with it's seductive cleanse. // these last three lines could be describing climax. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
I see. Maybe my mind was in a sensual mode when I wrote this and I didn't even know it. I was actually thinking about what it would feel like to have fire slip over the skin like satin. I like your thoughts much better than mine, cause mine were, well, kind of horrid. But there ya go, that is what I was thinking when I wrote it. And that is just darling you thought I meant bum.  The font is the usual font, it is just the size that appeared to make the r and n converge to become an m. It's still just so cute you thought I wrote bum.  |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Hm. Interesting combination of physical object and sensation. "If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh" |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Defenitely Sensual  Maree |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Thank you fractal, your comments are appreciated.. Maree, thank you dear for being so sweet as to read and respond. Sensual is nice, even in dark from time to time. So it's darkly sensual, think of it as just for you |
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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
I like it, even if it may be sensual I think I'm going to watch out for you from now on.I am a Knight who says Ni! |
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