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iMMuNe
Junior Member
since 2002-07-23
Posts 49
Maine, USA

0 posted 2002-10-31 07:23 PM


Who Am I? Im not me
Who Am I? Im what everyone else wanted me to be.

They want me to be someting else,
They want me to strive for something better,
I dont need them,
they will only understand once they get my death letter.

Is it,
ALL Better?
That Im gone?
The kid that cared for ya.

The kid that was there for ya,
The one who held out his shoulder for ya.
Yeah that kid, the one who was me.
Yet who am I? Someone else besides the one you used to see.

Family -- despised me,
You tried to -- prize me,
But im no ones posession,
Im so full of aggression,

When can I release all this tension,
From these suspensions,
That hold me down,
That keep me on my back.

Who Am I? Im not me,
Im a dead man walking,
See what you've done to me,
Now you see all this pain inside..

Now you see all I tried to hide,
Yet now its all showing since you couldnt see,
See through this smile,
Seeing through my real personality.

Its kind of funny,
How smiles change someones perspective,
Yet no one cares,
Yet someday they will live the life that I live.

Who Am I...



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Match
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since 2002-07-01
Posts 286
Canada Edmonton
1 posted 2002-10-31 07:28 PM


I liked this a lot, because really who are we all?   
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