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bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

0 posted 2002-10-15 01:28 PM

"Ever shot the heads off roses?"
she nestles closer to the frame.
Drunk in Rio, reading Rome.
All her actions, stone and flame.

Proffered foil in Madrid,
though I prefer cuts of sea.
Let the salt, let it come ... "let the salt
build a salt cemetary."

Big purple lights of dawn.
Large canvas bruising dark.
She dances waves, the morning's beams.
The headlights point, twin blades, twin sparks.

The kiss then of a sudden thunder.
Feel the water, find the under.
Big purple lights of tearing sky.
Rain the color of her eyes.

Questions low for questions high.
Swimming home to you; I try.

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2002-10-15 01:56 PM

Ever shot the heads off roses?"
she nestles closer to the frame.
Drunk in Rio, reading Rome.
All her actions, stone and flame

...........

The kiss then of a sudden thunder.
Feel the water, find the under.
Big purple lights of tearing sky.
Rain the color of her eyes.
just these two... and you have a poem in and of itself...

enjoyed my friend.. your unique visions are always a pleasure to contemplate

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

2 posted 2002-10-15 01:59 PM

Thank you, Ron. Inspired by many things. I'm a little more scarce than I used to be, believe it or not.

Looots of work.

Thanks for taking the time to write.

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

3 posted 2002-10-15 02:47 PM

And let's not forget this...

"The kiss then of a sudden thunder.
Feel the water, find the under.
Big purple lights of tearing sky.
Rain the color of her eyes."

could also stand alone.

Very nice, squirrel dude!

~Ed

Succubus
Member

since 2002-09-30

Posts 82
Canada, Ontario

4 posted 2002-10-15 06:46 PM

I enjoyed this very much. Your Words struck me as I read your piece... beautiful,
Kisses,
Succubus

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

5 posted 2002-10-15 06:49 PM

"Ever shot the heads off roses?"

OMG!!! *putting on a football helmet and hoping for the best* My stars, what a way to start a poem. *feeling faint now*

WhileIWasGone
Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 486

6 posted 2002-10-15 09:16 PM

Nice work as always...enjoyed!

H.

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

7 posted 2002-10-16 12:51 PM

Yep, this one was allll dark.

Hence the forum I placed it in. Thanks everyone.

(y' can remove the football helmet now, Anne)

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

8 posted 2002-10-16 02:02 PM

Alrighty, just don't go scaring a poor woman like that.

By the way, this was a great write. Done pure squirrely style.

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

9 posted 2002-10-16 02:05 PM

THanks, Anne.

And now I must depart
back into the underworld known as
"Work"!!!!

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