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A PLEA TO THE REAPER
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A PLEA TO THE REAPER |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
Death sweet death Please take me now And rid me of This curse called life I’ve paid my dues Yet still somehow My days are filled With pain and strife I’d turn to friends But have not one Nor any love That I can see So from this earth I choose to run For I can’t take This misery Death oh death Extend your hand And wrap me in Your cold embrace For only you Can understand If life’s a game I loose the race Of this world I grow so weary Watching tears Fall to the floor With all I’ve done For love and fury No one cares This I abhor Death dear death Please raise your cycle And slash it down Upon my head Now in this life I feel no tickle Only hate Lies in my bed Cold and lonely Here lay I As all my feelings Fade away I only wish That I would die So as not to face Another day G. A. Webb 10/12/02 Regret not that which you have done, |
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Succubus Member
since 2002-09-30
Posts 82Canada, Ontario |
Dear Webb: I really enjoyed this piece... take a look at the poem I wrote called - Waking up Again. It's in this forum, you might enjoy it, it reminds me a lot of the poem you have here. "I only wish That I would die So as not to face Another day" This is a very powerful line, no doubt my favorite... we all want to be released... but how do we know if what's on the other side is any better? How do we know that there's anything at all? I personally have hope there's something better (nothing can be worse than this, right?), and I guess this is called Hope... and it's this same feeling (hope) which keeps a lot of us here in this earth... Sorry for the long reply... I really enjoyed your work and look forward to reading more of you... Kisses, Succubus |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
Succubus: Thank you, I'm glad you liked this piece. I did read your piece and found that it had the same tone as this one. I'm sorry that you feel as I do, it's a terrible feeling. Hopefully, one day, things will improve for the both of us. Thanks again.  G Regret not that which you have done, |
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maddorani Member
since 2007-11-18
Posts 423houston,tx |
i have felt this way bunch of times and still do sometimes |
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