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Dark Poetry #3

Death(part 2)

Xeonox

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since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

0 posted 2001-02-11 10:30 AM

Tearing into my faith it descends,
Exposing the souls it has condemned,
Showing no grief for what it has done,
Teaching me a lesson hoping I’ll learn,
Feathering time tranquil my chances,
Comprehending it and making my alliance,
When it arrives with its full force,
Fighting my best, I’ll present no remorse.

Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)

[This message has been edited by Xeonox (edited 02-12-2001).]

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

1 posted 2001-02-13 01:13 AM

I guess no one found this poem interesting.

Mother_Earth
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since 2000-11-20

Posts 1370
1/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan

2 posted 2001-02-13 08:06 PM

I didn't see part 1, but you are one "deep" writer! I have read this several times and get a different feeling every time. I like this and think you are one talented person.
ME

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