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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon 
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Do you perhaps think your slight so slight really reaches do you think a poet heart beats any less for your careless oversight so slight so slight so slight so, no WhiteRose "I can't stay on your life support, there's a shortage in the switch"~~Pink |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
do you think a poet heart beats any less for your careless Powerful words, white rose. Battle not with monsters lest ye become a monster, and if you gaze into the abyss, the abyss gazes also into you. - Friedrich W. Nietzsche |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Thank you for your comment Brian. It was meant to be powerful and was really very therapeutic in the writing. |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
"Do you perhaps think your slight so slight really reaches" ~ I take this to mean the slighting by one person of another and if that person who slights the other person understands how the slight can affect the person slighted. Am I correct? "do you think a poet heart beats any less for your careless" ~ and if it makes a difference if the person who is slighted is poet. "oversight so slight so slight so slight" ~ Not an oversight, so slight... "so, no" ~...but a slight. Yes? A very interesting write; simple with not many words, but deep. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Opeth, your insight astounds me. You were right on the money! Thank you for reading and understanding. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Anne, Lovely breaths of words -- a simply complexity, complexingly simple. Mike |
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