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MissunderstoodGrrl
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since 2002-08-24
Posts 27
Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2002-08-30 11:17 PM


Fear runs through me like water
I feel theres nowhere to hide
I need a shoulder to lean on
I need a shoulder to cry on
I need you to hold my hand
I need you to make it right
I feel your slipping away from me
Leaving me to grow on my own
I have no hope on my own
Your what i need
What i need to hold my hand
Hold my hand while i'm here
Hold my hand when i'm there
Wherever i may be
Here on earth, or there in heaven
Please help me make it through
Please don't slip away from me
Just hold my hand until its time
Be my friend until the end
Always hold my hand
Hold it tight
For one day i might slip away
Please
Don't let me slip away
~January 30 2002

-:¦:-Hey god i know i'm just a dot in this world
Have you forgot about me?-:¦:-

© Copyright 2002 Tiffany Loxton - All Rights Reserved
Dragon Mistress
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since 2002-08-26
Posts 289
Washington, USA.
1 posted 2002-08-30 11:41 PM


This was good!  I enjoyed it much so!!
-Tanya

~*~I'm only a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~

MissunderstoodGrrl
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since 2002-08-24
Posts 27
Ontario, Canada
2 posted 2002-08-31 09:18 AM


Thank you very much...thats what i like to hear...im glad you liked it

-:¦:-Hey god i know i'm just a dot in this world
Have you forgot about me?-:¦:-

bsquirrel
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3 posted 2002-09-01 06:27 PM


Missunderstood,
I can feel the burning need in this -- and the talent you have for writing it down.

Mike

Zall
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since 2002-08-25
Posts 214
London, England
4 posted 2002-09-02 07:53 AM


A lot of sorrow here, good expression
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