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Zall
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since 2002-08-25
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London, England

0 posted 2002-08-27 07:50 PM


Weary
Mind and soul
Holding back the tide
Even one can make the difference

No longer in equilibrium
As we stumble toward the light
Unspeakable foulness
Threatens to engulf us

It’s not the pixels that matter
Think about the message
Are you reminded of darker times
You should be


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Dragon Mistress
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since 2002-08-26
Posts 289
Washington, USA.
1 posted 2002-08-27 10:19 PM


*scratches head*...make me think again.  This is good.

~*~I'm only a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~

PoeticGoddessOfDepression
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since 2002-07-02
Posts 439
I am everywhere
2 posted 2002-08-28 07:01 PM


I don't know what the message is, exactly.
Did you try to hide it, or have I lost my ability to read between the lines?
Either way, *sighs*, i like the mood of this.

Zall
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since 2002-08-25
Posts 214
London, England
3 posted 2002-08-28 07:56 PM


Dont overanalyse it, thats not the point

I would tell you, but what it means to you is more important.

Its clear to me, but then it should be. The hairs stood up on the back of my neck after I had finished it though

Thanks for your praise

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