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Zall Member
since 2002-08-25
Posts 214London, England |
Conflict Despair Existence is fleeting Our light flickering Twisting in the winds of circumstance There is no life but this one Governed and restricted By cold laws By incomprehensible mathematics Driven to madness Feeling more than rationality will allow When a look into my lovers eyes And when I speak to God |
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
A most excellent first post! Concise, but deep. "Feeling more than rationality will allow..." Great poem! |
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Zall Member
since 2002-08-25
Posts 214London, England |
No one has ever read my work until now. Although I dont think of myself as much of a poet, its time I inflict my work upon the world. Thank you for your praise. |
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Dragon Mistress Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 289Washington, USA. |
This is nice. I couldnt say I just liked one part...I like it all!! ~*~I'm only a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~ |
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Zall Member
since 2002-08-25
Posts 214London, England |
Thanks again |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I like the part about incomprehensible mathematics, though most are to me.  M^4 x i^3 X k^2 x e |
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