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just a dream
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just a dream |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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This is my longing's revelation sweet revealed, my soul's sensation This is the other half of me-- the part of me, that used to be... here is my spirit on her knees... the part of me that whispers "please"... screaming sanity through lies... this is my life--no compromise. Just a scream (in a dream) his hand is halfway up my knee... (Just a dream...) in a scream his hand is half-death round my throat... in a dream... I can scream whispers, I once spoke, through the smoke of the screen... And with each word I write? know you now, that I have died... each verse a sonnet into air, this is the heart of my despair... It's a dream. (i believe) just a dream I conceived... just a dream. just a dream. just a dream. just...a dream...? |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Just a dream...oh girl you know I feel this...right in my gut...HUGS |
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wandering Member
since 2001-01-21
Posts 92 |
dreams and reality are defined by a thin line of shadows...great read lost in thought, found in words. wanderer |
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Elizabeth Cor Senior Member
since 2000-10-13
Posts 879Over the river and through the woods |
Oh god... my heart is running fourth-speed but my body is deathly still (and yes, I use that word for a reason). Nights I wake up screaming (or scream and have to be shaken back into the living), I have to lie there, white knuckles squeezing pain out of the protective arms around me, mumuring to my mind that I am here in this bedroom, not in some grey backseat, or one of my childhood bedrooms...and it seems to integrate itself into me and my life in ways I would rather deny... SO, intended or not, these are the images I get from this... back to reread with a clear mind later. (p.s. I'm eating Skippy Honey Nut now...lol... went shopping today, had to buy some...) |
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ATelamon Member
since 2001-02-06
Posts 328Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up |
Some might say that dreams are the corporeal testing ground. You certainly bring the reader into your realm. Well said. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thought I'd say thanks while this was up top so it would LOOK like a bump and confuse people...lol...but thanks for reading...is another source of my insominia apparently... slaying dragons again...thank you! |
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