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wandering
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since 2001-01-21
Posts 92


0 posted 2001-02-05 08:42 PM


Tears flow
Tidal emotions swell
Subsiding to memories
Painfully etched
In forgotten cobwebbed corners
Dreamily haunting
Taunting me always
The clock of passion ticks wickedly
Tick tock
Tick tock
Tick tock
Time to reflect
Time to forget
Days gone by
days gone by
Days gone.


lost in thought, found in words.
wanderer

© Copyright 2001 Ron Fox - All Rights Reserved
He
Junior Member
since 2001-01-15
Posts 41

1 posted 2001-02-05 09:03 PM


"Tidal emotions" I liked that line. Actually I liked the whole poem. Thanks for sharing.


"Emotion revealed as the ocean maid..."

Temptress*Moon
Member
since 2001-01-15
Posts 240
Long Island, NY
2 posted 2001-02-05 09:04 PM


Exactly how I'm feeling right now*
Good work*S*
TemptressMoon



I slept and dreamed that life was beauty was thy dream then a shadowy lie? -ESH-

laryalee
Member
since 2000-06-19
Posts 352
Alberta, Canada
3 posted 2001-02-05 10:00 PM


A nice rendition - enjoyed it!
Lary
(Also like your signature!)

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