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Empty Glass, Empty World
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Empty Glass, Empty World |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Cold glass cuts shape, Sweating the air, In its own world, Empty glass, Cold world cuts shape, Sweating the air, In its own orbit, Empty world. If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come? |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Very cool wordplay. God, I love wordplay. Especially when it makes sense. ~wranx The shortest distance between two points... |
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
The Award for Best Title Woven goes to you, Moon Dust. Short, Simple, yet longingly complex. Wow! |
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Dragon en Morta Junior Member
since 2002-07-31
Posts 12 |
I'm not clear as to what it means, but damn if it doesn't sound cool. I think presentation is everything in this piece. Well done, indeed. Dragon |
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secretlife Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359Grean Earth ,,, |
Waaaaaw?? I am new here dear but I really like your words,,,Its sooooooo cool...and strange that make us thinking and thinking about these few words..and I really like the world play like wranx do...sooo keep going I am waiting to read more from yours..ooooops why dont u have alook to my new topic its not very well but its ok ,,,just tell me ur opinion.. bye and good luck dear.. (Easy come...Easy go)secretlife, |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Wranx - I know but i dont no where it came from I swear i just looked at an empty glass  Purity - Thank u I have an award Dragon - Thank u but it was just 1 mad inpristion thing Secretlife - thanks so much for readin I'll check yours out sure If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come? |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Beautiful! (strangely so?) Said if I only could ... |
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