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PoeticGoddessOfDepression
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I am everywhere

0 posted 2002-07-21 04:50 PM


The whisper of a loved one,
Deep inside the night,
Showes us strong beauty,
and lends it to us,
and is never forgotten.

The lie of a loved one,
Deep inside us,
Crawls inside, trapped,
the words ring,
and are never forgotten.

For both have happen to me,
It seems I've lost my sanity.

This evil snitch, that runis all,
has broken my life.
Not only life, but this love we had,
is leaving me with strife.
I'm clutching onto my deluted self,
worring myself sick.
'Is he alright,
'is he alive,
'Does he miss me at all?'
I am soiled...
Who would miss me???
Not you.
The one that held my heart
ever so safely in your hand,
but then made a fist.
Not you.
Never you.

"And I feel your heart beat/Pounding in my head/I'd like to control you/Cuz I can't control myself." -GreyDaze

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PoeticGoddessOfDepression
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since 2002-07-02
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1 posted 2002-07-21 04:50 PM


............not my best work.

"And I feel your heart beat/Pounding in my head/I'd like to control you/Cuz I can't control myself." -GreyDaze

bsquirrel
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2 posted 2002-07-21 07:59 PM


I like the hand/fist metaphor.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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