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shadowchild458
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since 2002-07-10
Posts 117
MN,USA

0 posted 2002-07-17 01:54 PM


yes yes yes i'm back. haven't posted here in a while so i figured i would! tell me if it's bad.


vanish
but don't forget to call
when the worry
tell them who you are
and where you're going
they won't understand
but explain
these little angels need to know
and so does this man
who's a child inside
and won't be able to handle
any of your words
but don't forget to pray for them
for they will pray for you
as you travel through the snow
and try to find out
'who you are'
just get over yourself and go home
they say
but who are they to tell you
what to do in your life
don't bleed
soon you'll be blind
your sick
so get help
just don't forget
your children

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PoeticGoddessOfDepression
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since 2002-07-02
Posts 439
I am everywhere
1 posted 2002-07-17 04:41 PM


I liked it ... even though I didn't exactly understand it.  The wording is beautiful, and I'm sure there is a wonderful purpose, but explain...? Please?

"Life is a waterfall, we're 1 in the river and we're 1 again after the fall."
-System of A down

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