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FadeN2you
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since 2002-07-15
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0 posted 2002-07-16 09:47 PM


They say love is like a butterfly,

and unfortnetly it's true.

Because everytime I sit down

I end up chasing after you.

But I just can't sit and wait,

I was never meant to be a stone.

I was meant to fly,

not to be alone.

And I just won't sit still,

no, I'll chase my butterfly.

Because how do you keep your feet on the ground,

when you were born to fly?




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Dark Kisses
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since 2001-06-24
Posts 364
Flat lands of Kansas
1 posted 2002-07-16 09:50 PM




Excellent!!

A friend, like a candle, is most needed in the darkness.

bsquirrel
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2 posted 2002-07-17 12:12 PM


That's not Dark! That's hopeful! Good!

She said burn ... together.
-TON

LadyPeach1
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since 2001-06-04
Posts 282

3 posted 2002-07-17 12:38 PM


That was SUCH a spectacular poem. IT WAS AWESOME GIRL!  You have SUCH talent and I am SOOOOOOOOOOOOO Glad you are sharing it with us!  We all enjoy your work ALOT and this poem is so freakin good!  You don't understand, I LOVE THIS!  This one is worth reading a few more times.  LOL.

LP1

wranx
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since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn
4 posted 2002-07-17 12:57 PM


This sort of butterfly chasing can sometimes last a lifetime...never give up.

~wranx

I have great faith in Humanity...It's just most of the Humans, I'm not too keen on.     E.F.Rose

EveGnosis
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since 2002-02-21
Posts 300
New York, USA
5 posted 2002-07-17 02:51 AM


in the philippines, the word is palakera for butterfly. i truly loved how you stated that you would not wait, but that also you would not wait, rather get up and chase that butterfly. i've been doing this for a year now. as i hope i catch my palakera, so i hope you do also. thank you.
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