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brian sites
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0 posted 2002-07-16 01:10 AM


dusty eyes
unwatched flies
more life inside
than when alive

clinging shirt
a sticky mess
better way
for you to dress

quieter now
mouth is sewn
enjoying this:
the buzzing drone

a nice day
summer heat
puddled around
your swollen feet

love the way
you did the walls
pollock
never had the balls

purple hand
outstretched in greeting?
i'll ignore it, thanks
and find some seating

I never aimed at reality; I aimed at truth. --Orson Welles

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idrift2u
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since 2002-07-09
Posts 60
MD., USA
1 posted 2002-07-16 01:23 AM


wow, I found my self laughing a little after reading it. Not sure of meaning, I sense death, and a little disgust....

Thumbs UP!

Thanks

GoddessofHell
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since 2002-07-09
Posts 76

2 posted 2002-07-16 01:25 AM


Great poem! Enjoyed very much.

Heather

devina
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since 1999-10-28
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Cali
3 posted 2002-07-16 10:18 PM


catharsis? oohh- wicked you tonight!!! grins...

I should try my hand at the mouth sewing technique...I find it quite appealing at times...rofl

love the mood you set this one up with!!!

take care you!
~D

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



bsquirrel
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4 posted 2002-07-17 12:15 PM


So that's why there's a fly in my room.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

brian sites
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5 posted 2002-07-17 12:42 PM


thanks drift- you got it

Heather- thank you

devina- awww shucks .... thanks
        (i find 20# test line wurks reel good)

squirrel- I can loan ya a swatter?
          thanks for reading

I never aimed at reality; I aimed at truth. --Orson Welles

Purity
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since 2001-11-20
Posts 526
Once Upon, USA
6 posted 2002-07-17 02:28 AM


I always hated that artificial crab meat...lol (pollock)

This, my friend, was wickedly clever. I shall have this one endure in my mind. Excellent job!

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